My bad /good impression on the end of 2013 year and the New year
2014
The
new year day is beginning day of the year. Many people celebrate with their
family or special person. What did you do on the end of 2013 year and the new
year 2014?
This
year, my family and I did not go to travel far. In the morning on the end of
2013 year, my family and I went to Mae-Kong market, which is in Samutsongkram
province. When we arrived, we walked into the market and bought many foods; for
example, squid, shrimp, fish, crab, shellfish, etc. Then, we went to the temple
and made merit. After that, we came back to home. In evening, my mother, my
sister and I cooked many foods. Then I had a big dinner together, and we sang a
song together. I was very happy. At midnight, I heard some noise from fireworks
and shouting around my village. I went in front of my home with mother and saw
the beautiful fireworks. I prayed for my family and I have a happiness and a
good health forever. Next day, my family and I made merit at the temple. Then,
my sister and I went to the nakhonpathom market, and bought some pork and
vegetable. In the evening, my family and I had a big dinner together.
Even,
this year my family and I did not go to travel far, but I was very happy much.
I think all members of my family stay together, and everybody was happy. It is
my impression

Your sentence is good and you use tense right. I think your blog is so cute and I feel happy when I read this text because it makes me think about my good impression on New Year. I think you happy and enjoy in New Year like me.
ตอบลบYou can use good grammar and good idea.It isn't too broad.When I read your blogger,It is easy to understand for me. :)
ตอบลบWow!!! Your activities in New Year are very interesting and fun. I feel happy like you when I read you text. I think that we were happy with our family, although we didn't go anywhere for travelling. Living and doing with family is the happiest!!!♥ I like your activities and your blog. You wrote it good. Thank you for good sharing :-)
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